Poetry Friday: That’s Yellow

The prompt this week for the Nevermores (a poetry writing group at Inked Voices) was to write a color poem. I love writing color poems! I wrote them in classes with kids of all ages when I was teaching, so this exercise brought back many sweet memories.

I began by rereading a few of my favorite mentor texts – COLOR ME A RHYME by Jane Yolen and Jason Stemple, HAILSTONES AND HALIBUT BONES by Mary O’Neill and John Wallner, and RED SINGS FROM TREETOPS: A YEAR IN COLORS by Joyce Sidman and Pamela Zagarenski. I also reread “That was Summer,” a poem by Marci Ridlon. All of these texts have different structures and strategies to offer – strong verbs, repetition, use of senses, and more. After picking yellow as my color and jotting down a few ideas, I challenged myself to spend the next few days searching for, and thinking about, yellow. I had fun jotting ideas on scraps of paper, the Notes app on my phone, and of course, a notebook. The best thing about this process was that I had fun playing with ideas and words and lived up to the mantra I chose for 2022 – Enjoy the Process.

That’s Yellow

Do you know yellow?
Sure you do.

Yellow winks from the wing of a blackbird
and the ring of a grackle’s eye.
It sings with the wind chimes
and shouts a warning when it’s not safe to cross.

Yellow is the smell of sunshine in the sheets on the line.
It’s the promise hidden deep inside daffodils,
and under the feathers of the finches at the feeder.
It’s life inside an egg.

Yellow is that feeling you get
when a laugh starts bubbling up inside
and you can’t wait,
you just can’t wait
to let it out—
and neither can your best friend.

That’s yellow.
Draft, 2022 Rose Cappelli

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Please join the Poetry Friday group here where Ruth has a beautiful haibun, a new-to-me form that combines prose and haiku, about an early morning birding walk in her new home in Paraguay.

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13 Responses to Poetry Friday: That’s Yellow

  1. jama says:

    Delightful and charming!! Your joy is palpable. 🙂

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  2. haitiruth says:

    Ooh, I love the daffodil line and the egg line best. So good! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com

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  3. margaretsmn says:

    Rose, I’d love to use this as a prompt for my students. What a wonderful yellow collection! All of it from the wink of a wing on the blackbird to the life inside an egg. I love it!

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  4. I love color poems and books and love all the books you mentioned, though I don’t know “That Was Summer.” Must look it up. I love the way you have concrete yellows and emotional yellow. Wonderful!

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  5. maryleehahn says:

    Fantastic! You covered all the senses and wove the images so creatively with rich language!!

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  6. Rose, so glad you shared your wonderful yellow poem with the world! 🙂

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  7. Rose, you inspire me with your research prior to writing. I am going to try that in the coming weeks. Like a firm, but loving parent, I will ask the burble of words waiting to spill forth to kindly hold those thoughts while I listen first to others’ wise words.

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    • rosecappelli says:

      Somewhere I picked up the idea of rereading whatever mentor text or texts you are using every time you go back to a PB draft to revise. I don’t always do it for poetry, but I find it does help with PBs.

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  8. lindabaie says:

    Beautiful, Rose, love reading all that you read for prep & then your own special feelings about ‘yellow’! I love the bird references & especially “It’s life inside an egg.”

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